Monday, April 11, 2016

Peter, or 'Peetuh'

WARNING SPOILER ALERT

The Story Cover (Image Source)

       In our story "Curveball", the main character is Peter, a pitcher who loves photography. Peter and AJ are best friends and teammates that are trying to get on to the high school JV baseball team. Peter's grandpa likes to take photos and him and Peter have one of those special "grandson and grandpa" relationships. You know what I'm talking about right? No? Oh never mind.

       Anywho... Peter has been feeling a terrible pain in his throwing arm, but he only has three more batters in the season, then it will all be over, the pain of the grinding of bone and cartilage against one another. He strikes the first batter on three pitches, he gets the second batter on a line out to first. 
       Then he gets to the last batter... He gets a fastball by him, then the batter fouls the next pitch off. Peter throws the curveball and hears a 'snap'. Peter drops to the floor and groans in pain. The last sight before Peter was taken to the hospital was the batter standing triumphantly on first.

By: JJ

2 comments:

  1. I like your first impression about the book and Peter. The only thing i would include is that peter wants to be the best pitcher around, and that he is very interested in photography.

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  2. I like your first impression about the book and Peter. The only thing i would include is that peter wants to be the best pitcher around, and that he is very interested in photography.

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